A unique decision to record your voice. I give you props for your bravery. The cooling fan on your computer interfered with understanding the presentation a little bit but I got the message and it was concise enough for me to understand. Try a different form of multimedia but keep the content.
This presentation did a very good job at providing good sources ad conveying the author's message. The noise in the background was a little distracting, but the way you used your voice really helped to keep the listener's attention. J and J
I love the content of this presentation. Awesome portrayal of the central message. The fan is a little bit distracting, but it's cool you went with a different approach of recording your voice. Maybe add in what the weaknesses are a bit more. Good presentation though.
Good job describing what you believed was unclear, and what needs to be done to get rid of the violence. Good questions at the end. The noise in the middle was a little distracting. Your voice was more engaging at the end rather then the beginning. Good job with detail.
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ReplyDeleteA unique decision to record your voice. I give you props for your bravery. The cooling fan on your computer interfered with understanding the presentation a little bit but I got the message and it was concise enough for me to understand. Try a different form of multimedia but keep the content.
This presentation did a very good job at providing good sources ad conveying the author's message. The noise in the background was a little distracting, but the way you used your voice really helped to keep the listener's attention.
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I love the content of this presentation. Awesome portrayal of the central message. The fan is a little bit distracting, but it's cool you went with a different approach of recording your voice. Maybe add in what the weaknesses are a bit more. Good presentation though.
ReplyDeleteGood job describing what you believed was unclear, and what needs to be done to get rid of the violence. Good questions at the end. The noise in the middle was a little distracting. Your voice was more engaging at the end rather then the beginning. Good job with detail.
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